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Hi! I'm Brooke, and I'm an author. I love writing; I always have, and I love anything that has to do with words and poems and reading. I also like to sing, act, swim, and laugh (a lot.)

Brooke Reviews: Divergent by Veronica Roth

Divergent (Divergent, #1)Divergent by Veronica Roth

My rating: 5 of 5 stars

I’m writing this review after rereading Divergent by Veronica Roth for the second time. Nothing beats the high of reading a book for the first time, but there is a sort of respect when you know where it’s headed.

Divergent is one of those novels that you think about for weeks after you’ve read the last line. It makes for a fantastic discussion with friends and other readers.

Beatrice Prior lives in a society divided into five factions, each based upon a facet of one’s personality (selflessness, intelligence, bravery, honesty, and kindness).

Beatrice is a member of Abnegation, which values selflessness, but after she turns 16 she is required to take an aptitude test and to decide which faction she’d like to spend the rest of her life. She could choose to remain with her family, or leave them behind forever. The results of her aptitude test aren’t very helpful. Beatrice is Divergent, which means she shows aptitude for more than one faction. Divergence is dangerous, because Beatrice can’t be controlled.

Her decision to transfer into Dauntless, the faction that values bravery, is the catalyst for everything that follows. She assumes a new identity, but struggles reconciling her new life with her old one. Though the plot is riveting, and the world building is fantastic, it is not because of these things that I call Divergent a favorite.

Tris’ journey to discover the true meaning of selflessness and bravery is compelling. Her realization that it is wrong to define people by just one thing is inspiring. The books are very much about labeling and stereotyping.

The characters’ response to fear was also fascinating. In Dauntless, the initiates are required to face their fears in fear landscapes, a simulation to bring their fears to life. (If you get a chance, you should read about Veronica Roth’s inspiration for the novel, because it’s all very interesting.)

Tris is such a dynamic character. She is pretty hardcore. She’s so very real, because she makes decisions that aren’t always based upon doing “the right thing.” While she sometimes regrets her choices, she realizes there is no going back and instead learns from her mistakes and moves forward.

I truly believe Divergent is a must-read because there is so much to be taken from it’s underlying themes and symbolism.

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Have your read this book? Please share your thoughts!

*DIVERGENT MOVIE REVIEW – to be posted soon.

Taking a spring break

IMG_0893Just wanted to let everyone know I will be taking a short break from blogging. I’m currently on Spring Break, and decided to take the rest of the month to begin preparing all upcoming posts.

I’ll be back on April 3. 

Here’s what you can look forward to: 

– new book reviews (I’ve been doing a lot of Spring Break reading)

– Divergent: movie vs. book

– more author interviews (if you haven’t already, check out my recent interview with Marissa Meyer)

– posts about the step-by-step process of improving your writer website (we’ll be using my blog as a case study!)

 

Hope you have a fabulous Spring Break,

Brooke H.

 

Interview with Marissa Meyer

marissa_meyer_3Meet Marissa Meyer, YA novelist and author of the Lunar Chronicles. (One of my new favorite series!) Cinder, Book 1 of the Lunar Chronicles and Meyer’s debut, was a NaNoWriMo novel. I recently read Cinder and Scarlet and completely fell in love with Meyer’s world and the fairy-tale retellings. Cress, Meyer’s newest release, is first on my Spring Break reading list. Winter, the fourth book of the Lunar Chronicles, has an expected publication date of February 2015. To find out more about Marissa Meyer and the Lunar Chronicles, visit her website and follow her on Twitter.

What is your greatest challenge while writing, and how do you overcome it?

Every book seems to come with its own challenges. I can bet that there will be a period about 40% in where I’m convinced that I’m writing the most boring book in the world, and at 60% of the way through I wonder what on earth I’ve gotten myself into, and at some point during the second draft I’m overwhelmed with world building and subplots… but whatever the problem is, I can always remind myself that I’ve been here before and I’ve had these doubts before and it’s all worked out just fine, so I just need to keep pushing on and get through it. I also find it’s helpful to break the work up into manageable tasks. Maybe I can’t keep every single subplot in my head at once, but I can think about THIS subplot, and I can figure out this character ARC or how to increase this romantic tension, and so I’ll focus on just that one thing and worry about everything else in its own time.

Are you a fan of sharing what you’ve written during the “early stages,” and asking for advice? If so, who has the privilege of reading your first drafts?

I like to get the book as far as I can take it on my own before I share it with anyone. Usually after the third draft I hit a wall where I can no longer see the book clearly and I don’t know what I need to do to make it better. That’s when I send it to my editor, agent, and beta readers – I have three amazing betas who are BRILLIANT, and always help me see things that I’ve missed. I don’t know what I would do without them.

Cress finalWhat would you say to teen writers who struggle with completing their drafts?

This is obvious, but if you ever want to finish something… you’re going to have to finish something! It’s so, so tempting to get called away by a shiny new idea, especially when your current project is giving you a headache. But eventually you’ll need to hunker down and push through to the end. Remind yourself why you started on this project in the first place – what did you love about it? And if you need to jump to the end and write the big climax or the happy resolution to keep yourself motivated, then do that! Though I will say that there WILL be projects that simply aren’t right for you at this time (I certainly have my share of unfinished writing projects lying around), try to be really mindful about choosing when to keep working on something and when to let it go.

What are the two most important traits writers can possess, and why?

Ooh, good question! I think writers have to be curious. We want to know about people and the world. You never know where an idea will come from – an idea for a new story, or something that opens up your imagination to some cool new twist for your current project, and I find that half the time it’s in reading or researching or talking to someone that I get those little pieces of inspiration that grow into stories.

And I think the second trait for a writer is dogged determination. Or stubborness. Writing can be a long, slow, trying process. There are a lot of doubts along the way, a lot of doubters, a lot of rejection and criticism. But if you can still get up every day and keep moving forward in the face of all that, you’ll always be making progress.

What is the one piece of advice you wish you had been given when you began writing?

Read craft guides! I didn’t start reading books on plot and structure and editing and characterization until after college, and as soon as I started reading them my skills increased exponentially. I think some writers are afraid that learning the elements of writing will somehow destroy their creativity or originality – hogwash! Once you know the “rules,” and WHY something works and why it doesn’t, then you know how and when to deviate from that to make something that’s your own. Knowledge is always a good thing.

If you weren’t a writer, what would you be?

An aspiring writer! 😉

*Thanks so much for answering my questions!!

HAVE YOU READ THE LUNAR CHRONICLES? What did you think?
Read my review of Cinder.

Consistency trumps perfection (especially when it comes to habits)

large_monthly_plannerI recently read James Clear’s “Transform Your Habits.” (Downloadable for free when you subscribe to his site. Totally worth it.)

He writes about the importance of establishing a schedule in order to develop and maintain habits.

“It took me a while to realize it, but it’s not about always doing your best work, it’s about doing the best you can on a consistent basis.”

This was the realization he came to when he created a blogging schedule for himself. This really hit home for me, because sometimes it’s a struggle to stick to my own Monday/Thursday blogging schedule.

I put the schedule in place for this very reason, because I realized it was the only way I would be consistent. So, I understood in January 2014 (when I established the schedule) the importance of consistency.

However, I was still very focused on perfection. And while this is very noble, it is also exhausting.

James Clear expressed the idea much more eloquently. Basically, he is trying to say it is better to be consistent than to give up because you aren’t “inspired” or ready to produce your “best.”

Of course, this doesn’t just apply to blogging. The same could be said for my novel writing. As long as I’m writing consistently, it doesn’t matter if my work is “publishable” or prize-worthy.

I hope you can take the same attitude, and realize that developing habits by being consistent will go a long way toward achieving your goals.

Check Out These Quality Posts (links included!)

linksI don’t know what I’d do without Feedly, the app on my iPhone which allows me to read the most recent posts of every blog/website I follow. Any free time I have throughout the day is usually spent on Feedly or Twitter. Anyway, I read so many great articles that I often can’t resist the urge to share them. Below I’ve listed some of the best posts I’ve read within the past few weeks. Check them out if you’re interested.

 

Helping Writers Become Authors is currently writing a series of posts called “Creating Stunning Character Arcs.” Each post is devoted to an aspect of this topic.

Creating Stunning Character Arcs, Pt. 1: Can You Structure Characters?

Pt. 2: The Lie Your Character Believes

Pt. 3: The Thing Your Character Wants vs. The Thing Your Character Needs

Pt. 4: Your Character’s Ghost

 

Writer Unboxed is giving its audience a peek “inside publishing.” This series of posts is about the ins and outs of the publishing industry, complete with guest posts and interviews with editors and agents. Extremely helpful and informative stuff.

Introducing Inside Publishing Month at WU (first post in the series)

 

The Smart Passive Income Blog recently published two great posts about blogging.

5 “Five Minute or Less” Blogging Tips That Yield Big Results. I’m Using Tip #1 in This Title.

How I Increased my Email Subscriptions by 315% (And the Small, Quick Thing That Made It Happen)

 

Also…CONGRATS to Amy Zhang for the cover reveal of her debut novel, Falling Into Place. YA Highway hosted the cover reveal earlier this week, and it’s fabulous. Be sure to enter the giveaway!

Check out my interview with Amy Zhang.

 

Vampire Academy: Movie vs. Book

vampire-academy-movie-poster-2I recently reviewed Vampire Academy, written by Richelle Mead. I loved the book and went to see the movie with a friend.

This is what I loved:

CAST

The actors/actresses were exactly as I’d imagined the characters. Zoey Deutch and Lucy Fry were fantastic as Rose and Lissa, and their friendship was completely natural and believable.

One of the most important aspects of Vampire Academy is the friendship and intense loyalty between Rose and Lissa, who share a bond which allows Rose to perceive Lissa’s thoughts and feelings. So I was pleased to see that their relationship was an important aspect of the movie, as well.

SOUNDTRACK

Rose is an impulsive, feisty, and snarky character, and the soundtrack perfectly reflected her personality. I’ve watched the trailer multiple times, and the background music is spot-on for the overall tone of the movie as well as the book.

ALSO…

I thought the producers struck a really great balance between the darker aspects of the movie and the humor. The characters are witty, and often it was the dialogue that made me laugh aloud. (Sarah Hyland, who played Natalie, was also really funny.)

Best line of the entire movie: “They say Dimitri is a god. But I’m an atheist. With a gun.”

Be sure to check out Richelle Mead’s review of the movie! I think she made some great points and it’s definitely reassuring to hear an author praise the movie adaptation of her book.

If you’ve read the book but haven’t seen the movie, SEE IT. If you’ve seen the movie but haven’t read the book, READ IT.

Brooke Reviews: Vampire Academy by Richelle Mead

Vampire Academy (Vampire Academy, #1)Vampire Academy by Richelle Mead

I was completely sucked into Vampire Academy, written by Richelle Mead. (That was my lame attempt at a vampire joke. Sorry.)

I’d pretty much sworn off vampire books, but decided to give this one a shot. Needless to say, I finished the book in about a day and immediately began reading Frostbite, book 2.

Vampire Academy is about a girl named Rose Hathaway, who is training to become the guardian of Lissa Dragomir, a vampire with royal heritage. Lissa is the heir to the Moroi throne, and she and Rose share a “bond,” which means Rose can sense what Lissa is thinking and feeling.

They’ve been on the run for two years, but they’re caught and taken back to the Academy. The dangers that prompted them to run away are still ever-present, but the girls also have petty high school drama to worry about.

Rose is impulsive, and has a quick temper. She was a great heroine, not only because of her smart mouth, but more so because of her intense desire to protect her best friend at all costs. Rose and Lissa’s friendship is real and inspiring. When it comes to Lissa, Rose is completely unselfish. And as they eventually discover, their bond means more than they could have ever imagined.

The book was exciting and captivating. Romance, tension, mystery, wit – this book had it all. I’m looking forward to the rest of the series.

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Watch TV, become a better writer

Veronica_Mars_season_3I think we’d all like to justify our excessive  TV watching.

Netflix, Amazon Prime, and Redbox give us easy access to our favorite movies and TV shows. We spend hours glued to our TVs, phones, or computer screens watching episode after episode. And we feel guilty because it’s time we should have spent writing instead.

Here’s the thing: we shouldn’t feel guilty, because there is much to be learned from TV. And if you watch with a writer’s mindset, you can simultaneously enjoy the entertainment and improve your writing skills.

The writer’s mindset, of course, is the key. Below, I’ve listed the things you should pay attention to as well as a few questions you could ask yourself as you watch.

1. Observe character relationships and character growth.

Ask yourself this question: What has captured my attention? Why do I watch this show?

There may be several reasons, but I’d be willing to bet it’s your love for the characters that’s first and foremost.

We sympathize with the protagonist. We enjoy being a part of their story world. Their every-day conflicts are engaging and interesting. And, most of all, we want to watch them change and mature. The completion of a character arc in a novel is often difficult to accomplish. On screen, the completion of character arcs seems effortless.

What does the protagonist want more than anything? What is their motivation? What gives them purpose? What is his/her goal?

You need to be answering these questions for each of your own characters. It’s a learning exercise, however, to answer these questions for the characters of a favorite TV show because it could shine some light on what you’re missing or could strengthen or improve.

It isn’t all about the protagonist, of course. Sometimes I watch a show solely for the sub-plots. Two supporting characters are falling in love. The protagonist’s best friend suddenly has his own goal, his own conflict. Pay close attention to the protagonist’s relationships with other characters.

Did the protagonist’s perceptions of someone change? Has the protagonist been betrayed? Who does the protagonist trust, and why?

Let me touch briefly on TV romance. Yes, it can be cliché. But I think it’s especially helpful to see how a romance gradually builds, because rarely do two characters fall immediately in love.

whitecollar2. Take note of the carefully constructed plot.

TV shows are unique because the typical episode runs between 30 minutes to an hour. This is a short period of time for problems/conflicts to be introduced and resolved.

Therefore, episodes follow a formula, which may or may not be easily identifiable. This is similar to structuring a novel. We recognize the importance of structure, because without basic elements our stories would collapse.

So…what plotting techniques do you believe you could use in your novel? What worked for that TV show?

On the other hand, be sure to ask yourself what you would have done differently. Maybe you felt the conversation the protagonist overheard was a bit too convenient. How could you have made it less hackneyed?

Please, whatever you do, don’t overanalyze. I’m merely suggesting you turn your TV-watching time into an opportunity to be productive.

Get Smart (the old TV show), White Collar, Downton Abbey, Elementary, Covert Affairs, Chuck, and Veronica Mars are the TV shows I’ve been addicted to at some point or another in the past several years. I watched episodes back-to-back and nothing could stop me. But I’m currently writing a spy novel, and I think that’s one of the reasons I’m so drawn to mystery and crime on TV.

You tell me – what are your favorite TV shows?

New camera, new images for the blog

pink-tree

I’m pretty excited to share this news – I’ve got a new camera (an early graduation gift)! It isn’t something I’ve shared here on the blog before, but I love photography. For the past couple of years I’ve played around with my dad’s Nikon (I especially love taking pictures of people) but now that I have my own camera I’m really looking forward to experimenting.

new-cameraThe camera is a Canon EOS Rebel T3. The above picture is of a beautiful tree in my backyard a little before sundown.

The purpose of sharing this with you is because I plan on using the camera to take photos for the blog. In the past I’ve downloaded images from the internet, which I haven’t always cited/credited to the original source.

Anyway, I’ve got a lot to learn, but I can’t wait to get started. 🙂

 

Reading and writing YA romance

6a0120a7e4f25f970b017c36b9f296970bIn honor of Valentine’s Day, I’ve decided to put together a list (in no particular order) of my favorite YA romances. It was very difficult to choose, and I’m sure there are many more I haven’t yet read. And below List #1, I’ve linked to three very well written posts about the art of writing romance. Enjoy!

For readers:

I appreciate books when they are about something larger than myself. Romance is simply a bonus. The authors of the books listed below did such a great job incorporating romance into an already incredible plot.

Harry Potter (J.K. Rowling) – Harry and Ginny, Ron and Hermione
Hunger Games (Suzanne Collins) – Peeta and Katniss
Divergent (Veronica Roth) – Four/Tobias and Tris
Clockwork Angel (Cassandra Clare) – Will and Tessa
Graceling (Kristin Cashore) – Po and Katsa
This Lullaby (Sarah Dessen) – Dexter and Remy

For writers: 

How to build a romance thread in your story, Tangled style (Go Teen Writers)

Why People Love Stories about First Love (The Write Practice)

About Kissing Scenes (Publishing Crawl)