Hi! I'm Brooke, and I'm an author. I love writing; I always have, and I love anything that has to do with words and poems and reading. I also like to sing, act, swim, and laugh (a lot.)
Delirium, by Lauren Oliver, did not disappoint. Oliver poses an incredibly thought-provoking question which hooks the reader from page 1. (First line: “It has been sixty-four years since the president and the Consortium identified love as a disease, and forty-three since the scientists perfected a cure.”) The protagonist, Lena Haloway, is a girl who believes in the system and the cure which will rid her of amor deliria nervosa. However, she is also held captive by fear. She lives with her aunt because her mother commit suicide due to the disease. She counts the days until her procedure, but her mother is always in the back of her mind…the procedure didn’t work for her mother.
At first, I wasn’t sure I really liked Lena’s character. But as the book progressed my love for her grew. I began to identify with her, empathize with her. I was proud when she recognized her society for what it was and began to shed her original beliefs. Her love story is special because Lena did not even know what love was. The characters were definitely special, and very well-written.
Powerful, exquisite, and moving. 🙂 I can’t wait to read the two remaining books in the trilogy.
Meet Rachel Coker, YA teen novelist. Coker published her first novel, Interrupted, in March 2012, and recently published her second book Chasing Jupiter in December 2012 (both Zondervan). I love Coker’s story – she discovered her love of writing when she was 11, wrote her first novel when she was 14, and published the novel at the age of 16. To learn more about Coker and her books, visit her website.
What is your greatest challenge while writing, and how do you overcome it?
My biggest challenge is just finishing! I have a short attention span, and I tend to get tired of things before I’ve spent the time necessary to complete them! I sometimes get bored working on the same story for a long time, and I just want to work on something new! But usually, if I go back and remind myself just what it is about this story that makes it worth finishing, I can motivate myself to keep going.
How do you motivate yourself to write consistently? What is your writing process like (plotter, or pantser?)
I’m actually not a super-consistent writer. I usually only write when I feel creative or inspired, which might be days in between! But then when I do sit down to write, I can pour out words and scenes for hours on end! For me, it’s all about letting myself be creative and not constraining myself to follow any certain schedule or pattern, at least when it comes to my creative writing. But that’s different for everyone!
Are you a fan of sharing what you’ve written during the “early stages,” and asking for advice? If so, who has the privilege of reading your first drafts?
The only people to read my first drafts are my mom, sister, and agent. I don’t want to spoil it for people when I know it’s going to get better! But it is good to get the advice of others, and those three people are pretty critical so I respect their opinions.
What would you say to teen writers who struggle with completing their drafts?
“Uuuuggghhh… I feel your pain….” Haha, but really–I do! It’s hard to finish a first draft. It takes a lot of work, and time, and dedication. But then, once you finish it, you experience the most amazing feeling of accomplishment! It’s totally worth the blood, sweat, and tears! Just keep looking for fresh inspiration, and don’t forget to take breaks sometimes so you don’t feel overwhelmed. You can do it!
What are the two most important traits writers can possess, and why?
The ability to find inspiration everywhere, because that’s the only way you’ll be able to create beautiful stories about real, flawed human beings that inspire and touch others. And the ability to write about what you know, because that’s the only way you’ll be able to relate your real struggles in a personal and engaging way.
What are you currently working on? What is next for Rachel Coker?
I’m hard at work on Book #3! I’m almost finished with the first draft and will soon be moving on to editing! Hopefully, it will come out sometime next year! I’m also blogging (www.rachelcoker.com) and giving personal writing lessons to students all across the country through email!
Counting Backwards, by Laura Lascarso, was a touching novel about the complications of discovering oneself. The protagonist of Lascarso’s debut finds it difficult to let go of her anger and trust anyone but herself, but she eventually realizes what it means to love and be loved.
Taylor is a 16 year old who is angry with the world. She’s angry with her father, for leaving her mother, she’s angry with her mother, an alcoholic, and she’s angry that she’s ended up in Sunny Meadows, a juvenile psychiatric correctional facility. Taylor just wants a way out, and is reluctant to make any effort to change.
I really enjoyed this book because Taylor’s journey is emotional and moving. Although it was often easy to get frustrated and annoyed with Taylor’s decisions, I understood why she chose to do the things she did and my heart went out to her. The reader sees everything through Taylor’s eyes, and it was interesting to watch her perspective slowly change.
The characters were quirky. Taylor’s unlikely friends have much to do with her recovery. The plot was refreshing. Lascarso crafted a very realistic story, and I admire her for that. Taylor is a teenager who has gone through a lot. It shouldn’t have been easy for her to change. Her issues, and her fears, were much deeper than even she realized.
This book is honest, something that readers appreciate. Definitely a must-read. 🙂
In a recent post, I wrote about my first writers conference. I attended three sessions which were extremely engaging, and I promised I’d share with you what I learned. You can find my post about Session #1 here.
Now, I’ll do my best explaining the Plot Clock, taught by Jamie Morris, which was probably the most useful thing I learned during the entire conference (this happens to be what I’ve been struggling with lately).
The Plot Clock gives writers the opportunity to decide whether or not their idea for a novel is worth pursuing. Its purpose: to determine whether your story has all the elements it should.
The Plot Clock is a circle divided into four sections. Your starting point is at the top of the circle. (Move clockwise around the circle.)
Act I
Ordinary World (the main character’s life circumstances prior to her story’s start)
Author establishes the MC’s skills, strategies, strengths/weaknesses, need/goal
Establishes setting and introduces characters
Inciting incident takes place in Act I
The first glimpse the MC (or the reader) gets of the Special World
Binding Point: the moment when the MC finds himself/herself committed to the Special World
Point of no return
Signals the end of Act I and the beginning of Act II
Act II
Special World (the new circumstances presented by the story and through which the MC struggles on her way to making a change)
Tests/challenges FAILED
The MC’s strategies/survival skills (established in Act I) may not work
Low Point Entry: the period when the demands of the Special World have brought the MC to his/her knees
MC struggles
MC experiences true change
Low Point Exit: MC has experienced internal change or has made a meaningful sacrifice
Signals the end of Act II
Act III
Continuation of Special World
“messy middle”
Tests/challenges PASSED
MC is getting stronger, developing new strategies/skills
Turning Point: the event which forces the MC to face the final battle of the Climax
Signals the end of Act III and the beginning of Act IV
Act IV
Climax (the “battle to end all battles,” occurring between the MC and the antagonist)
The MC does not necessarily have to win the battle
Denouement (day-new-ma: literally “unknotting.” The final resolutions of the intricacies of the story and the lives of the characters)
Need/goal of the MC is satisfied
I believe the Plot Clock is a fantastic tool for writers. It is a reminder that the protagonist of the story is always working toward something, moving forward, even if he/she faces stumbling blocks and conflict along the way. Every character and every scene should make it around the Plot Clock. By using the Plot Clock to quickly outline a scene, you can be sure you aren’t wasting words or time because you have already identified its purpose in the story.
Thank you, Jamie Morris!
Other Helpful Articles/Links:
(*Keep in mind that the Plot Clock has various formats – it is also called the Three or Four Act Structure)
I loved the way Fia and Annie’s story was told – I only learned bits and pieces as the story progressed, going back and forth between the present and the past. Narrated by both Fia and Annie, the book was intriguing and exciting and I couldn’t put it down because I was so extremely invested and attached. From page 1 until page 237.
Fia and Annie are sisters and orphans. Annie is blind, but she is a Seer who glimpses the future. Fia is also extraordinary, gifted with perfect instincts. After the death of their parents, the girls are taken to a school where they become prisoners, used by a man who benefits from their abilities. The girls are intensely loyal to one another, and their bond is what ties them to their bleak situation. Fia does whatever she is told to do, terrible things, because if she does not she is putting her sister at risk.
Their story is so raw and emotional because of the deep relationship and love they have for one another. It becomes clear that both girls would sacrifice anything to protect the other. Although the plot of this novel is what originally drew me in, the characters captured my heart.
They are so real. Fia taps, taps, taps. Her quirks and the repetition of her thoughts make her unique. She is funny and strong and broken. James Keane, son of the man who keeps the girls captive, is difficult to figure out. I questioned his motives throughout the book and was torn between hating him and falling for his charm.
Read the book. Read it, because the concept is new and fresh, the characters are unique, and their story is beautifully written.
In a recent post, I wrote about my first writers conference. I attended three sessions which were extremely engaging, and I promised I’d share with you what I learned. So here goes…this is a short outline of what I was taught by Vic DiGenti in my first session of the day, “How to Write Killer Fiction – an Introduction to Mystery Writing.”
Elements of a Mystery
Sleuth
Well-rounded character with human flaws
Give your sleuth a goal, a need, a desire
Characters are driven by revenge, reward, and relief
Murder (crimes that need solving)
Clues and characters
Suspense, conflict, tension
Resolution
Creating Your Sleuth
Build a resume (name, age, birthday, physical description, etc)
“put your characters on a couch” and ask questions
Who are you?
What do you fear?
What are your hopes/dreams?
Creating a Crime Scenario – the Victim
Define the crime – who, how, and where
Is the victim tied to the plot?
How does the victim lead the sleuth to the villain?
Creating a Villain
Must test your sleuth
Equal to sleuth in intelligence/creativity
Give the villain some humanity
Be a Troublemaker
Make the protagonist’s mission more difficult
“throw rocks” at the protagonist
Take away advantages
Building Suspense
Remember the “bomb under the table”
Let the audience in on what might happen
Suspense is created when the audience anticipates
Turn up the sensory detail
Bait and switch
Increase tension, cut away
Use short, declarative sentences
Ask “suppose?” and “what if?” to complete the premise of your mystery.
Remember your audience.
Do your research, and be accurate!
Vic DiGenti’s Recommended Books:
Writing and Selling Your Mystery Novel – Hallie Ephron
How to Write Killer Fiction – Carolyn Wheaton
Murder and Mayhem – D.P. Lyle, M.D.
The Complete Idiot’s Guide to Private Investigating – Steven Kerry Brown
A Writer’s Guide to Private Investigators – Hal Blythe, Charlie Sweet & John Landreth
A Writer’s Guide to How Private Citizens Solve Crimes – Elaine Raco Chase & Anne Wingate
Don’t Murder Your Mystery – Chris Roerden
Writing Mysteries – Jan Burke
On Writing – Stephen King
Meet Laura Lascarso, YA novelist. Counting Backwards is Lascarso’s debut novel, the Florida Book Awards 2012 Gold Medal Winner. I recently met Lascarso at an event at my public library, and she was one of the authors who recommended I attend a writer’s conference. (Which was a fabulous idea!) To learn more about Lascarso and her book, visit her blog and Twitter account.
What is your greatest challenge while writing, and how do you overcome it?
My greatest challenge presently is finding enough time to write. Between working full-time and raising a family, there doesn’t seem to be enough time for brushing my teeth, much less writing, but I have been dedicating weekends to writing and revising only, and those sessions have been very productive and rewarding.
How do you motivate yourself to write consistently?
I am pretty self-motivated when it comes to writing the first draft. For revising, I find concrete deadlines very motivating. Chocolate and coffee are also great motivators when it comes to daily rewards.
What is your writing process like (plotter, or pantser/blurter?)
I’m a pantser that has become more of a plotter. My process is to usually write the first 50 pages just so that I can get to know my character, what she wants and what she is up against. Then I take those 50 pages to my critique group with my intentions for the story and together we brainstorm plot twists, added conflicts, subplots and the climax. Many times I have to completely rewrite what I’ve written, but it’s always ten times better because I know more about where my character has been and where she is going.
Are you a fan of sharing what you’ve written during the “early stages,” and asking for advice? If so, who has the privilege of reading your first drafts?
I only share with my two critique partners and sometimes my agent if I’m wondering if a project is marketable or not. My agent, Caryn Wiseman, is also an expert in the genres of young adult and middle grade fiction. She has great tips on how to make my work more compelling to those markets. All three women I trust and respect very much. Both of those qualities are important to have when handing over your creative work when it is still in the fledgling stage.
How do you believe aspiring writers should connect with their local writing community? Why/why not is this beneficial?
There are great writing communities in the Tallahassee area that I’m getting to know better and better. I’m also a member of SCBWI (Society for Children’s Book Writers and Publishers). I go to at least one conference a year to stay current in the publishing business, as well as meet with other writers, agents and editors. I depend heavily on my critique group for feedback on my writing, and I rely on my Twitter community of writer friends for the social and networking aspects of writing professionally. All are extremely beneficial in their own way. I have found it to be true in all avenues of life, the more you give, the more you get back.
What is the one piece of advice you wish you had been given when you began writing?
Be patient. You’ll get there. Maybe not as fast or easily as you would like, but you’ll get there. I’m still getting there myself!
What are you currently reading?
I just finished two really great YA books–If I Stay by Gayle Forman and A Northern Light by Jennifer Donnelly. I’m now reading Pure by Julianna Baggott. All three are amazing writers with unique and strong voices. I’d recommend all three books.
I wanted to share what I was able to accomplish during the prompt-writing hour of the writer’s conference I recently attended. This new technique really excited me – definitely a great way to write when I don’t really feel like writing.
1. Find a poem.
2. Pick out the main idea of the poem.
3. Use this main idea to create lists.
4. Build a scene during a timed writing.
This is how the steps above were used during our prompt-writing hour:
The poem “Riding Backwards” was read aloud. With this title/phrase/main idea written at the top of my page, I created two lists. The first was a list of literal ways one could “ride backwards.” (Riding backwards on a bike, a horse, riding backwards on a roller coaster, etc). The second was a list of metaphorical ways one could “ride backwards.” (One’s thoughts “ride backwards” as they reminisce, etc).
It was time to build a scene.
The three requirements: The scene must be written in present tense, the character must “ride backwards” (either literally or metaphorically), and the character must meet/come into contact with another character.
(I’m fairly certain I accidentally ignored the first requirement of writing the scene in the present tense. Which is exactly why I had no desire to share at the end).
I’m definitely going to do this again, on my own. There are so many creative poems to choose from, and you could really surprise yourself with what you’re able to come up with. This might also be something to try if you’ve come up against writer’s block. So give it a shot!
*Thanks to Jamie Morris for leading this prompt-writing hour.
I am excited to share that I attended my first writers conference yesterday. I think it’s important to be involved, and a goal of mine lately has been to join the writing community of Tallahassee. There is so much I can learn from the other writers, whether or not they are published, or somewhere in between.
I learned about the 2013 Tallahassee Writers Association Conference at a separate event earlier last week. The event, a Q&A session with a panel of authors, including moderator Adrian Fogelin, was held at my local library. (Check out my recent interview with Fogelin.)
When I approached two of the authors after the Q&A, both recommended attending a writers conference – and, lucky me, a conference was scheduled for the upcoming weekend! I quickly registered.
The conference was absolutely fabulous, and I took lots of notes, met some really cool people, and was given a tote bag. (I felt really professional, although I was the youngest attendee present. Everyone thought I was in college, which was pretty cool.)
Because my dad told me to “make the most of the day,” I decided to attend the pre-breakfast prompt-writing hour at 7:00 in the morning, which was not mandatory. In a follow-up post, I’d love to share the techniques I learned to get my creative juices flowing.
The conference didn’t end until 4:15, after I’d attended three sessions. I chose to attend “How to Write Killer Fiction!” presented by Vic DiGenti, “The Plot Clock,” presented by Jamie Morris, and “Backstory: A Fine Balance” presented by Jamie Morris and Julie Compton.
Throughout the day, I met an editor and a book coach, as well as a literary agent (okay, fine, I only stood next to her in the lunch line – and we talked about Zumba).
Needless to say, it was a fabulous experience and I look forward to interviewing several of the people I had the privilege to meet. In the following two weeks, I plan to write three posts detailing what I learned at each of the sessions I attended yesterday. So I encourage you to check back soon. 🙂
“What are some of the coolest/weirdest/funniest/most disturbing things you’ve researched for a story?”
I think it’s in the back of our minds – the acknowledgement of the cool, weird, funny things we Google search – but it’s something we don’t really think about until we’re asked the above question.
When I began thinking about what I could write for this post, it all came back to me.
I seriously began writing my first novel when I was 12, about a young girl who lives in a city in the sky and must journey to earth. I researched maps of Italy (boring, I know) and images of Venice to create a folder with info about the setting of my book.
Shortly after that, my search history log took a turn for the worse.
I began researching poisons (which poisons kill, and how long does it take to die? which poisons move slowly through the bloodstream?) and various weapons. (Might I remind you that I was probably only 13 at the time?)
I turned to the Internet only after I’d asked my parents. They were my first “search history log,” and unfortunately I can’t go back and delete…
“Dad, can diamonds cut through metal?”
After I’d completed my trilogy, I moved through a dragon phase. I was still caught up in fantasy novels, and reading Eragon by Christopher Paolini definitely influenced my strange fascination with dragons.
More recently, I’ve researched spies. I’ve always wanted to write about spies, so I walked out of my local Goodwill bookstore one day carrying a large nonfiction book about spies, which pictured a large gun on the front cover.
Here’s what I think: the worse your search history log, the better. We’re writers. It’s what we do.
(If you’d like to check out a recent post I wrote about a similar topic, you can find it here.)
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